Daily Oral Language
Sangwoo Song DOL #1
1. mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice
2. to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment Corrected DOL #1
1. Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team who believe no one should practice.
2. To ensure success, the teahcers (unclear) should require -the ones doing the experiments -to have new lab equipment in the project. DOL #2
1. darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam
2. me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project Corrected DOL #2
1. Darnel doen't have any reason to question their instructions, but he does want an explanation for this exam.
2. Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebooks for class and our long term project. DOL #3
1. yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had
2. the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish Corrected DOL #3
1. Yes, Terri won the game, but at the time, we didn't know that she had.
2. The effect of the program cancellation,m which bothered most of us members, was to end the project before we could finish. DOL #4
1. because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected
2.irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration Corrected DOL #4
1. Because you should have heard their voices when I told them how their vacation time would be affected.
2. Regardless of what Grandpa says, it'll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration. DOL #5
1. rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us
2.neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide Corrected DOL#5
1. Rob commented that our neighbors should be welcoming children outside of our neighborhood.
2. Neither Ben nor I had read the assignment, we did not know the definition of the word 'chide.' DOL #6
1. marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game
2. the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning Corrected DOL#6
1. Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard; I'm sure I will see a lot of actions in today's game.
2. The race between the three relay teams is close; none of the three is giving up hope of winning. DOL 9
1. ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world
2. yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners DOL 8
1. our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans
2. well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert Corrected DOL #8
1. Our social studies teacher asked us, to write reports on the South with emphasis on African Americans.
2. Well, I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us to the concert. DOL 11
1. my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite
2. at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information Corrected DOL#11
1. My oldest sister, who's going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight.
2. At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me." DOL 12
1. having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution
2 there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert Corrected DOL #12
1. Having read the novel The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.
2. Because there were too many things to do I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills, or go to friend's concert. DOL 13
1. mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country
2.having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip Corrected DOL#13
1. Mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to Germany after World War II helped to maintain peace in the country.
2. Having finished her foreign exchange trip, she requested a plane ticket to the United States at its end. DOL#14
1. he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away
2. it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out Corrected DOL#14
1. Incidentally, he was unable to attend our 15th high school reunion because he lives too far away.
2. It says that regardless of the poor weather, the Shakespearean play, Romeo and Juliet, will be sold out. DOL#15
1. you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil
2. although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together Corrected DOL#15
1. You should've followed three steps: first open the hood, secondly check the level, and lastly add more oil.
2. Although our dogs are different, we won't have any problem walking them together. DOL#16
1. does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government
2. there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit Corrected DOL#16
1. Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 p.m. or was he out of student government?
2.There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit. DOL#17
1. nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments
2. she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early Corrected DOL#17
1. "Nothing could be farther from the truth," Mr Perez "stated than you comments."
2. She was quite young, no more than twenty-six when she earned her doctorate, consequently, she began her career early. DOL#17
1. yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican
2. this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports Corrected DOL#17
1. Yes, they're going to welcome whoever want to come to the rally, whether Democrat or Republican.
2. This car, a 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable, regardless of what the TV show "Classic Car Reports." DOL#18
1. because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow
2. they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old Corrected DOL#18
1. Because it snowed heavy last night, it's all right if no one comes to basketball practice.
2. They mentioned that on January 2nd 2000, this building was seventy-five years old DOL #19
1. follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible
2. in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated Corrected DOL#19
1. Follow some simple rules and you'll succeed: listen in class, do your homework, and learn as much as possible.
2. "In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be more challenging," Martina stated.
Sangwoo Song
DOL #1
1. mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice
2. to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment
Corrected DOL #1
1. Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team who believe no one should practice.
2. To ensure success, the teahcers (unclear) should require -the ones doing the experiments -to have new lab equipment in the project.
DOL #2
1. darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam
2. me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project
Corrected DOL #2
1. Darnel doen't have any reason to question their instructions, but he does want an explanation for this exam.
2. Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebooks for class and our long term project.
DOL #3
1. yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had
2. the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish
Corrected DOL #3
1. Yes, Terri won the game, but at the time, we didn't know that she had.
2. The effect of the program cancellation,m which bothered most of us members, was to end the project before we could finish.
DOL #4
1. because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected
2.irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration
Corrected DOL #4
1. Because you should have heard their voices when I told them how their vacation time would be affected.
2. Regardless of what Grandpa says, it'll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration.
DOL #5
1. rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us
2.neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide
Corrected DOL#5
1. Rob commented that our neighbors should be welcoming children outside of our neighborhood.
2. Neither Ben nor I had read the assignment, we did not know the definition of the word 'chide.'
DOL #6
1. marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game
2. the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning
Corrected DOL#6
1. Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard; I'm sure I will see a lot of actions in today's game.
2. The race between the three relay teams is close; none of the three is giving up hope of winning.
DOL 9
1. ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world
2. yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners
DOL 8
1. our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans
2. well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert
Corrected DOL #8
1. Our social studies teacher asked us, to write reports on the South with emphasis on African Americans.
2. Well, I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us to the concert.
DOL 11
1. my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite
2. at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information
Corrected DOL#11
1. My oldest sister, who's going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight.
2. At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."
DOL 12
1. having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution
2 there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert
Corrected DOL #12
1. Having read the novel The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.
2. Because there were too many things to do I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills, or go to friend's concert.
DOL 13
1. mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country
2.having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip
Corrected DOL#13
1. Mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to Germany after World War II helped to maintain peace in the country.
2. Having finished her foreign exchange trip, she requested a plane ticket to the United States at its end.
DOL#14
1. he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away
2. it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out
Corrected DOL#14
1. Incidentally, he was unable to attend our 15th high school reunion because he lives too far away.
2. It says that regardless of the poor weather, the Shakespearean play, Romeo and Juliet, will be sold out.
DOL#15
1. you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil
2. although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together
Corrected DOL#15
1. You should've followed three steps: first open the hood, secondly check the level, and lastly add more oil.
2. Although our dogs are different, we won't have any problem walking them together.
DOL#16
1. does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government
2. there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit
Corrected DOL#16
1. Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 p.m. or was he out of student government?
2.There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit.
DOL#17
1. nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments
2. she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early
Corrected DOL#17
1. "Nothing could be farther from the truth," Mr Perez "stated than you comments."
2. She was quite young, no more than twenty-six when she earned her doctorate, consequently, she began her career early.
DOL#17
1. yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican
2. this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports
Corrected DOL#17
1. Yes, they're going to welcome whoever want to come to the rally, whether Democrat or Republican.
2. This car, a 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable, regardless of what the TV show "Classic Car Reports."
DOL#18
1. because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow
2. they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old
Corrected DOL#18
1. Because it snowed heavy last night, it's all right if no one comes to basketball practice.
2. They mentioned that on January 2nd 2000, this building was seventy-five years old
DOL #19
1. follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible
2. in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated
Corrected DOL#19
1. Follow some simple rules and you'll succeed: listen in class, do your homework, and learn as much as possible.
2. "In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be more challenging," Martina stated.